

Mannequin -Poetry Evolution-This is the evolution of a poem, when you write a poem, a full spread of thoughts and feelings spanning outward into oblivion (That's how it feels with me sometimes) and you like the poem and want it to be better, you can evolve it using simple steps, the question is where do you stop? I think the second draft of this poem is the best but what do you all think?Mannequin -Poetry Evolution-
Mannequin
Tight cloths Too much make-up Skinny Jeans Skinny wrists Skinny waist Showing bones and dying souls on a runway of leering eyes looking for love to fill the emotional  
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Warm Fuzzies,
Kyimoto
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"When you succeed, no one remembers. When you fail, no one forgets." -Napoleon
"There's no I in team, but there is a T and that's damn close enough for me!"
Howdy!
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Born of Ice
Brought up by Magic
Alive with death
A mage so tragic
~The Ice Knight
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Warm Fuzzies,
Kyimoto
~~
"When you succeed, no one remembers. When you fail, no one forgets." -Napoleon
"There's no I in team, but there is a T and that's damn close enough for me!"
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Born of Ice
Brought up by Magic
Alive with death
A mage so tragic
~The Ice Knight
And seeing ZombieLand
--
Warm Fuzzies,
Kyimoto
~~
"When you succeed, no one remembers. When you fail, no one forgets." -Napoleon
"There's no I in team, but there is a T and that's damn close enough for me!"
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